The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie depicts the percentages of the activities chosen by anthropology graduates after graduation, and the table represents the salary ranges anthropologists received after working for 5 years.
This
survey was conducted at one university and focused on undergraduate degrees graduate.
Overall
, being a full-time worker was the most common destination, and the government sector offered the highest salary percentages.
First,
fresh graduates who chose nine-to-five jobs comprised more than half of the total career preferences, representing a significant portion. Trailed by part-time jobs at 15% and unemployed at 2% lower.
Besides
that, 8% of graduates decided to continue their studies
while
working part-time, sharing a similar rate with those who pursuing full-time postgrad studies. After 5
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work
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, 40% of alumni working as freelance consultants
paid
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over $75,000,
while
only 5% received around $25,000 and $50,000. The Government sector paid over $100,000 to 50%
anthropologists
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, showing the largest proportion compared to
other
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three sectors.
On the other hand
, the majority of anthropologists in private companies earned between
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$50,000 to $75,000 of the individuals (35%), followed by 30% who received more than $100,000.
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