The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The presented scheme demonstrates the floor layout of a central library 20 years ago compared to the present day. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it can be noted that the place underwent major reorganization over a period of time, becoming more technologically advanced.
To begin
with, twenty years ago the reading room and the cafe were located on the left and the right side of the entrance, respectively.
Further
down the floor, tables and chairs were placed in the middle, between the sections of adult fiction and non-fiction literature in a passage.
Next,
in the far left corner, there used to be the entertainment class with CDs, videos and computer games, with the children's books located across in the opposite corner.
In contrast
, now the Central Library has been completely reorganized.
Firstly
, the computer class was moved to the bottom left room, and the enquiry desk was substituted with a cafe.
Secondly
, the tables and chairs in the middle of the floor were discarded, adult fiction literature was moved to the right side of the library, with an added information desk and self-service machines next to it, and all reference books are now being placed across them.
Finally
, the children's section was moved to the top left room and had been upgraded with 2 sofas and a place for storytelling events,
while
the top right corner is now changed to a lecture hall.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "presented" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • conversion
  • reflecting
  • digital literacy
  • accessible
  • shift towards
  • community-focused
  • relocated
  • decreased demand
  • inviting
  • increased focus
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