The Chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012

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different

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areas in Newport city centre over the

period

of nine years between 2003 and 2012. Units are measured in number of incidents.

Overall

, it can clearly be seen that the highest

crime

rates

> the area of

crime

with the highest rate at the

start

experienced a noticeable fluctuation,

whereas

the other two types witnessed moderately >

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burglary

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was the highest at the

start

. It had been overtaken by car theft

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by the end of

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level number of accidents at the

start

, the

rates

of burglary stood at just below 3500 in 2003. The

rates

rose slightly to roughly 3750 in 2004.

Thereafter

, it experienced a dramatic drop by approximately 2650 in the following four years, From

this

point onwards, it increased moderately to almost 1500 in 2009 and remained stable until the end of

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. Regarding the other two areas with lower levels at the

start

, the

rates

of car theft started at about 2800 in 2003. The

rates

then

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2750 before dropping moderately to just above 2000 in 2006. From

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In contrast

, the

rates

of robbery fluctuated moderately. The

rates

stood at about 600 in 2003.

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reached a peak of approximately 900 in 2005 and troughed at precisely 500 in 2008.