The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day.
These two maps
illustrates
the site of a university in 2006 and the current day.
Change the verb form
illustrate
Overall
, Linking Words
compare
to the year 2006, the outline of the whole space Change the form of the verb
compared
were
generally Unnecessary verb
apply
remain
the same.
As present, one of the land for tree planting Correct subject-verb agreement
remains
were
deduced between 2006 and the present day. To be more specific, it was the space on the lower left of the map and there Correct subject-verb agreement
was
is
Wrong verb form
was
a the
new Choose an article
a
the
library
there. Use synonyms
Futhermore
, Correct your spelling
Furthermore
this
Linking Words
library
was located between Use synonyms
parking
lot and the Add an article
the parking
a parking
sports
ground Use synonyms
then
Linking Words
move
to Wrong verb form
moved
this
space. The land for the Linking Words
library
in 2006, which Use synonyms
was rebuild
Change the verb form
was rebuilt
a
Change preposition
into a
sports
centre, was Use synonyms
also
expanded and Linking Words
account
Wrong verb form
accounted
a
part Change preposition
for a
from
Change preposition
of
parking
lot and Add an article
the parking
a parking
sports
field.
Comparing the map in 2006 and now, except Use synonyms
the
Change preposition
for the
library
and the cafeteria, there was a lot of building that did not exist in the past were built after 2006. Use synonyms
For instance
, bus Linking Words
stop
, Fix the agreement mistake
stops
sports
Use synonyms
center
and bicycle storage were all newly Fix the agreement mistake
centers
build
.Wrong verb form
built
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, sports with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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