You and your friend have booked tickets to go to the theatre. You are now unable to go but have found another friend to accompany him/her instead. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter, explain why you can not go to the theatre with your friend say who can go instead of you tell them why you think this person would be good to go with Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sam, I hope you are doing well and are in the best spirits. I am writing

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letter to tell you that I will be unable to join you at the theatre on 4th December of Wednesday as we plan to watch a movie. I know you will disappointed after getting

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letter but I assure you one person will accompany you on that day. You know very well I take a keen interest in teaching and two days ago, I applied for

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position at different places in the hope of getting a job. You will be surprised that I got a message for an interview yesterday from two places. It is my childhood dream to become a teacher and I do not want to miss

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golden opportunity. It would be great If I gave

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ticket to my younger cousin. He is very talkative and always ready to go to the cinema. The amazing thing is that you already met Ivan and you will never feel he is a stranger. He is an extrovert personality and

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others by talking continuously on any topics

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as related to the movie, actor or entertainment industry. Please let me what you think about

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idea. Take care! Warm Regards, Sid.

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You could enhance the coherence by using more linking words to smoothly connect different sections of your letter.

Improvement

Make sure to proofread for minor grammatical errors, such as missing articles or incorrect prepositions, to improve overall clarity.

Content

The purpose of the letter is clear, and all required elements are present.

Language Use

The tone is friendly and appropriate for writing to a friend.

Structure

The letter has a logical flow, moving from the explanation, to the introduction of the alternative, to the reason why the alternative is suitable.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

212 words

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