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The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101

The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101
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The line graph illustrates the changes in
birth
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 and death rates in New Zealand from 1901 to 2101.
Overall
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, the
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rate
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 is expected to decline,
whereas
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 mortality is anticipated to surpass the
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rate
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 in the future.
To begin
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 with, the
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rate
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 started at around 20000 in 1901, fluctuated from 25000 to 30000 in 1921, and
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 peaked at roughly 65000 in 1961. After reaching its peak, the
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rate
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 continued to witness a fluctuation from 50000 to 60000 from 1981 to 2001
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 and
then
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 experienced a downward trend from
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 on,
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 it is predicted to
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 decrease to about 24000 in 2101
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, the mortality began at approximately 10000 in 1901. The death rates rose significantly over the next century, reaching nearly 35000 in 2024. The death
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 is expected to increase sharply
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 and is predicted to overtake the
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rate
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 in 2041 at roughly 48000.
Further
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 increasing to 56000 by 2101.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words birth, rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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