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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table presents the
amount
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 of produced
milk
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 in
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Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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, Australis,
Tanzania
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 and
Guatemala
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 yearly.
This
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 includes data from 1990 to 2010.
Overall
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, the highest
amount
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 of
milk
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 was produced in
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Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 in three different years. In comparison, the lowest was created in
Guatemala
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. In detail, in 1990, the highest
amount
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 of produced
milk
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 was in
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Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 with 11,262,000
litres
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, and with a close difference of 16,000
litres
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, Australia came next. The remaining countries only made less than 100,000
litres
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 of
milk
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 in 1990,
Tanzania
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 with 87,000
litres
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 was more than thrice the
amount
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 made in
Guatemala
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 with only 26,000
litres
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. After a decade, the production in
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Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 declined by 107,000
litres
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as well as
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 Australia by 141,000
litres
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.
This
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 was opposite to
Tanzania
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 where the
amount
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 increased to 142,000
litres
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,
also
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,
Guatemala
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's
milk
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 production went up to 55,000
litres
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 in 2000.
Finally
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, in 2010, the
amount
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 of created
milk
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 in
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Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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inclined
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increased
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 to 11,466,000,
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this
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which
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 was 204,000 higher than in 1990. Australia's
milk
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 produced continuously went down to 9,165,000
litres
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,
Tanzania
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 created 155,000
litres
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 of
milk
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 in 2010 and
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lastly
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lastly,
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 the lowest
amount
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 was in
Guatemala
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 with only 84,000
litres
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, milk, netherlands, tanzania, guatemala, litres with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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