The chart below shows the results of three surveys on absenteeism in a particular European country in the years 2000, 2005 and 2010

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The bar chart compares reasons for missing work or study,which were made by citizens of one European country between 2000 and 2010.

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it is clear that

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although

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some absenteeisms' per cent declined, family responsibilities and unexpected situations did not change in the

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half-decade. In 2000, nearly 45

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of workers cited health-related issues as their primary reason for absenteeism.

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figure fell to 40

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in 2005 and 35

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in 2010, indicating a gradual improvement in health. Stress,

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, had the least impact in 2000, affecting only 6

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of workers.

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percentage remained almost unchanged in 2005 at 5

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by 2010, non-stress-related absenteeism had increased to 15

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. Personal obligations,

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as meetings, accounted for 15

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of absenteeism in 2000 and rose to 20

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by the end of the period. Family responsibilities were the second biggest problem, preventing 29

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of workers from coming to work in 2000. In 2005,

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share fell to 23

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, reflecting a slight reduction in

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difficulties.

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, external disruptions

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as traffic or adverse weather conditions accounted for 10

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in 2000.

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figure increased significantly in 2005, reaching 16

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, and remained unchanged in 2010.

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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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3 paragraphs

204 words

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The chart below shows the results of three surveys on absenteeism in a particular European country in the years 2000, 2005 and 2010

Some people believe that money spent on space exploration is not justifiable. There are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As languages such as English, Spanish and Mandarin become more widely spoken, there is a concern that many minority languages may disappear. Some countries have taken steps to protect minority languages. What is your view of this practice ?

Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?