The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps above depict an
island
. The first map shows the condition before construction while
the second map illustrates after it. Overall
, it can be seen that there are a lot of changes, especially the
Correct word choice
since the
island
is adding several new facilities for tourist
. Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
For example
, luxury hotels, a fancy restaurant, a venue for reception.
At first,
the island
was really empty and there was only beach
and sea. Beforehand, visitors were forbidden to swim, but now they can. Not only that, but Correct article usage
a beach
also
there are new sailing boats and visitors walk through pier that have been built to use the sailing boat
. After that, the restaurant and reception is now open for customers.
Before construction, people Fix the agreement mistake
boats
can
not have a long trip there because there Wrong verb form
could
was
no houses to liveChange the verb form
were
.
Change preposition
in.
However
, the island
has been improved by building many accomodations
. So, the customers can stay longer. Correct your spelling
accommodations
Moreover
, because of some new facilities, the owner of the island
made two tracks, the footpath and vehicle track.Submitted by wishmeluck on
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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