Some people feel that boarding school are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons consider both sides and discuss.

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Some people argue that boarding
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school
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schools

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are the best option for
children
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to learn. Meanwhile, others do not agree because there are reasons for it. Actually, the positive side of boarding
school
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is the
children
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become independent.
However
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,
the
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boarding
school
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is too risky for
children
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to get
harrashment
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harassment

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. In the end, the conclusion will be made.
Firstly
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, the
children
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will learn how to do household things on their own without helpers. In boarding
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school
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schools

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, there are rules that ask students to make
schedule
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everyday
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what
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of what

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they want to do that day.
As a result
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, it makes them more independent.
For example
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, I have a friend who
have
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has

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ever
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never

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been
go
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to boarding
school
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, she told me that she and her friends must
getting
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get
be getting

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up early,
washing
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their dishes and clothes,
sweeping
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and
moping
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mop

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, etc.
However
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, doing
households
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household

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things like these can
be learn
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be learned

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at home.
Furthermore
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,
by
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sending the
children
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to boarding
school
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is kind of dangerous because the parents do not have control
on
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their
children
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. Sometimes, there are boarding schools that give hard
punishement
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punishment

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to the kids because they do not obey the rules. The punishment is various,
such
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as
hitted
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, locked up, dried in the sun, and many more.
For instance
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, I have
ever
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never

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seen
a news
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news
a piece of news

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on TV about a boy who
have been
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died because the teacher
hitted
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hit

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him as many as 10 times using
a wood
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a block of wood
a plank of wood

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and it
was happened
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happened
has happened

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at
boarding
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a boarding

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school
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.
To sum up
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, some people are arguing
is
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the boarding
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Use synonyms

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school
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schools

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are good or not.
Ater
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After

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considering both sides, indeed,
the
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boarding
school
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can make
the
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children
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are
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not dependent
with
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on

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others.
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, the risk is very dangerous.
Besides
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that,
children
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can still
independent
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at home.

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Try to develop the main points more fully by providing detailed explanations or examples for each argument.
coherence cohesion
Work on the logical flow between paragraphs and ideas; ensure each paragraph transitions smoothly to the next.
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Ensure that both sides of the argument are equally developed, providing a balanced view on the topic.
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You successfully addressed both sides of the argument, considering the benefits and drawbacks of boarding schools.
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You have used personal anecdotes, which help illustrate your points and make the essay more engaging.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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