Some people think it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
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days, Change preposition
These
littel
individuals say it is good to choose Correct your spelling
little
friends
who always have the same ideas as them. While
,
other Remove the comma
apply
people
think it's better to have friends
who sometimes disagree with them. So, in this
essay, I am going to discuss both points and give my own opinion.
First of all, people
prefer to choose friends
who have the same behavior
. Change the spelling
behaviour
In other words
, they will understand themeselve
, their Correct your spelling
themselves
relationship
will be friendly , they will be always happier people
,
because they Remove the comma
apply
having
a nice Wrong verb form
have
relationship
. Also
, they will continue their relation
in the future, the Replace the word
relationship
relationship
is builds
by good Change the verb form
is built
choosing
. Replace the word
choices
As well as
, if they choose Rephrase
Also
friends
are
Correct pronoun usage
who are
similer
Correct your spelling
similar
them
, they will feel comfortable and they can talk Change preposition
to them
with
them any time they want , and Change preposition
to
also
they can understand them if they have problem
or if they sickAdd an article
a problem
,
because their Remove the comma
apply
emotion
is a close Fix the agreement mistake
emotions
of
them. So, why Change preposition
to
that's
an important Verb problem
is
people
have choose
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to choose
friends
who have the same character, which it
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apply
.
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Secondly
, some individuals like to choose friends
who different
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are different
of
them. To illustrate, maybe Change preposition
from
that
it Correct word choice
apply
has
useful Verb problem
is
them
, which Change preposition
to them
this
relation
support
them to improve. Correct subject-verb agreement
supports
Moreover
, two students are friends
, and anther
one Correct your spelling
another
want
to choose a Change the verb form
wants
mjore
up Correct your spelling
more
major
his
level , but his Change preposition
to his
friends
advise him to avoide
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avoid
this
a mjore
, Correct your spelling
more
due to
it is not a
good for him. So, Change the article
apply
this
kind of relation
has benefits. Replace the word
relationship
However
, some friends
can't understand themselve
, and their Correct your spelling
themselves
relation
will be Replace the word
relationship
pressure
,Wrong verb form
pressured
as well as
they will break this
relation
. Replace the word
relationship
Therefore
, the relationship
needs to understand
and some patience.
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be understood
To conclude
, in my opinion , I prefer to choose friends
who have the same ideas , because I will feel more glad with them and I can take my rest ,
when I Remove the comma
apply
spoke
with them.Wrong verb form
speak
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