Some people think it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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individuals say it is good to choose

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who always have the same ideas as them.

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other

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think it's better to have

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who sometimes disagree with them. So, in

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essay, I am going to discuss both points and give my own opinion. First of all,

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prefer to choose

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, if they choose

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, some individuals like to choose

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them to improve.

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to choose a

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level , but his

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has benefits.

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and some patience.

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, in my opinion , I prefer to choose

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who have the same ideas , because I will feel more glad with them and I can take my rest

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when I

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with them.

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Coherence and Cohesion

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Task Achievement

Develop your main points with more specific examples and clearer explanations to enhance comprehension.

Language Use

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Task Achievement

Your introduction provides a clear outline of the two viewpoints and states your intention to discuss them.

Coherence and Cohesion

You appropriately included a conclusion that summarizes your opinion and main ideas.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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harmonious environment
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