The bar chart shows different methods of waste disposal in four cities; Toronto, Madrid, Kuala Lumpur and Amman.

The bar chart shows different methods of waste disposal in four cities; Toronto, Madrid, Kuala Lumpur and Amman.
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The given graph compares
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various types of Waste disposal in different cities namely, Toronto, Madrid,
Kuala
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and Kuala
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Lumpure
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Lumpur
.
Acursory
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A cursory
glance at the graph is enough to make
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clear that,
landfill
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and
incineration
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were the most popular methods in four areas
while
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the percentage of using compositing way was the smallest among other categories.
To begin
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with, Toronto used different methods
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waste disposal.
Landfill
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was the greatest number and reached a peak at more than 70%.
Whereas
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the proportion of
incineration
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,recycling and compositing kinds
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the lowest by less than 10%. The figures
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all methods in Madrid were near
from
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each other but the most common one was
incineration
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by exactly 40%.
Incineration
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way
account
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accounts
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of
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approximately a half
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per cent
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of the total in Kuala Lampur and
a
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almost 25 of recycling.
While
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landfill
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percentage was the lowest at less than 20 per cent. Amman preferred
landfill
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and
incineration
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words landfill, incineration with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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