The bar chart shows different methods of waste disposal in four cities; Toronto, Madrid, Kuala Lumpur and Amman.
The given graph compares
a
various types of Waste disposal in different cities namely, Toronto, Madrid, Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
Kuala
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and Kuala
Lumpure
. Correct your spelling
Lumpur
Acursory
glance at the graph is enough to make Correct your spelling
A cursory
it
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is
clear that, Unnecessary verb
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landfill
and Use synonyms
incineration
were the most popular methods in four areas Use synonyms
while
the percentage of using compositing way was the smallest among other categories.
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To begin
with, Toronto used different methods Linking Words
to
waste disposal. Change preposition
of
Landfill
was the greatest number and reached a peak at more than 70%. Use synonyms
Whereas
the proportion of Linking Words
incineration
,recycling and compositing kinds Use synonyms
were
the lowest by less than 10%. The figures Correct subject-verb agreement
was
of
all methods in Madrid were near Change preposition
for
from
each other but the most common one was Change preposition
apply
incineration
by exactly 40%.
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Incineration
way Use synonyms
account
Correct subject-verb agreement
accounts
of
approximately a half Change preposition
for
percent
of the total in Kuala Lampur and Change the spelling
per cent
a
almost 25 of recycling. Correct article usage
apply
While
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landfill
percentage was the lowest at less than 20 per cent. Amman preferred Use synonyms
landfill
and Use synonyms
incineration
.Use synonyms
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