The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Food/Drink/Tobacco Clothing/Footwear Leisure/Education Ireland 28.91% 6.43% 2.21% Italy 16.36% 9.00% 3.20% Spain 16.80% 6.51% 1.98% Sweden 15. 77% 5.40% 3.22% Turkey 32.14% 6.63% 4.35%

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The given tables provide data on consumer spending in four various categories in different nations namely,Ireland,Italy,

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. A cursory glance at the table is enough to make it clear that, most

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spend more money on food,drink and tobacco

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the lowest among other items.

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lays out approximately 32.1% of food,drinks and tobacco.The second highest figure in Ireland at around 28.9 per

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spends nearly 18.80 per

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in Italy and

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of citizens in Ireland,

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individuals in Italy spend exactly 9.00%.

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lay out just 5.40 per

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spend around 4.35% on leisure and education.

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people

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spend nearly 3.00%.Irlanda and

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spend only (2.21 and 1.98%) respectively.

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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Food/Drink/Tobacco Clothing/Footwear Leisure/Education Ireland 28.91% 6.43% 2.21% Italy 16.36% 9.00% 3.20% Spain 16.80% 6.51% 1.98% Sweden 15. 77% 5.40% 3.22% Turkey 32.14% 6.63% 4.35%

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