You are living in a city in a foreign country, and a friend from your home country is soon coming to visit you for several days. Write an email to your friend, asking him or her to bring some things from home which you need saying why you need them making arrangements to meet Begin your letter ‘Dear --------’
Dear Ahmad,
Hope you're doing well. I have come to know through your letter that you are coming to the UK
in
summer vacation. It's great news for me because I think Change preposition
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this
the
right time to visit here. But before you arrive let me explain some important points about which you should have to be careful during the visit.
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Firstly
, the weather is too cold here so it is better, if you could bring some warm clothes which may be helpful to save you from the cold.
In addition
, I would like to recommend that keep your luggage as limited as you can, because otherwise
it can create a Add a comma
otherwise,
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problem
due to
the strict immigrent
policy of UK officials.
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immigrant
Furthermore
, I have a special request, please visit my home before your departure date and take my important documents. I already told my younger brother about your travel plan, so they will wait for you.
I hope you will not forget to bring these and also
keep in mind all my advice. I hope your journey will be a memorable and fantastic trip of your life. Remember a friend is waiting for you with excitement.
Yours Faithfully,
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task achievement
Provide more explicit arrangements for meeting up with Ahmad during his visit to enhance task achievement.
coherence cohesion
Ensure all paragraphs focus on a single idea for improved coherence and cohesion.
task achievement
The letter uses a friendly and suitable tone, appropriate for writing to a friend.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriately used and add to the cohesiveness of the letter.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,