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The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with the date they opened, kilometers of route, and passenger numbers per year in millions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with the date they opened, kilometers of route, and passenger numbers per year in millions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates about
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metro
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station
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stations
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 of metropolitan
cities
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 with their features in three categories which are date opened,
kilometers
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 of
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route
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the route
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 and
number
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 of
passengers
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year. On the one hand,
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 tube was opened in London in 1863. London tube
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 is the longest public transportation carrying 775 million
passengers
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 per year.
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Railway
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The railway
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system
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 of Tokyo takes third place in
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 it was set up in 1927.
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 Tokyo station is popular. After
London
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the London
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metro
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system
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 was opened in Paris with 199 kilometres of
route
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. Paris
metro
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system
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 takes second place with carrying
passengers
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 after Tokyo.
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Kyoto
metro
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system
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 was constructed in 1981 after Washington DC .
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Railway
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The railway
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system
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 of Kyoto stays back kilometres of
route
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with
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carrying
passengers
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 per year
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compared
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in
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 six various
cities
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.
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, The latest
railway
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system
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 was built in Los Angeles.
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 its ranking
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a
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 same
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 Kyoto. In conclusion, there are 6 different big
cities
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 in
chart
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the chart
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 and it categorizes
railway
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station
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stations
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 of
cities
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 with three aspects.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words metro, cities, route, passengers, railway, system with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • underground railways
  • kilometers of route
  • passenger numbers
  • annually
  • compare and contrast
  • mega-cities
  • public transportation infrastructure
  • extensive network
  • rapid transit
  • capacity
  • commuter volume
  • inauguration date
  • modernization
  • vintage
  • urban development
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