The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram depicts the
process
of electricity production from a certain type of coal as a raw material.
Overall
, there are five stages before the electricity is distributed to factories, domestic
household
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households
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, public
insfrastructure
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infrastructure
, commercial buildings, or transportation systems. The
proces
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process
prices
begin
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with the
preparing
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of coal, and
ending
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at the distribution stage. Looking at the electricity production
process
in detail, coal must be
preprared
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prepared
in the mining station. These coal are
then
crushed to become smaller pieces before being
transport
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to the gasifier plant. After
arrived
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, using a gasification facility,
this
material is converted into
syntethic
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synthetic
gas
. At the
main-third
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main third
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stage in the
process
,
this
gas
is cooled and it
also
produce
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waste heat throughout the
process
.
Next,
the cooled
gas
through a cleaning step to reduce the
environment
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environmental
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effect. After that, raw
gas
is distributed to the
gas
power plant with
burning
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the burning
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process
to get electrical energy before ready to use.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, gas with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Coal mining
  • Open-pit mining
  • Transportation logistics
  • Power plant
  • Pulverized coal
  • Combustion
  • Boiler
  • Steam generation
  • Turbines
  • Kinetic energy
  • Electrical energy
  • Generator
  • Cooling and condensing
  • Recycling
  • Electricity transmission
  • National grid
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