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There are two planning charts of Southwest Airport which clearly show recent interior structures and redevelopment plans for the airport next year.

There are two planning charts of Southwest Airport which clearly show recent interior structures and redevelopment plans for the airport next year.
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The two maps illustrate how the main changes will take place upcoming year after
reconstruction
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the reconstruction
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in
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of
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 Southwest
Airport
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.
Overall
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 it appears that
air
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the air
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 station will expand it is capacity, with
fae
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far
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 more public services and infrastructure, mainly in the departure and arrival parts.
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However
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However,
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 some areas have no plans to change. If we look at the departure room, it already
have
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has
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 check-in which is going to relocate to
east
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the east
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 side of
area
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the area
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.
Then
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 the Bag drop
expected
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is expected
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 to
build
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be built
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instead
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 of
check-in
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the check-in
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 desk.
Cafe
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The cafe
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also
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 will be replaced
to
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in
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 the west part of
room
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the room
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. Another striking change is that spare doors for both departures and arrivals are added. As regards arrivals,
this
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 section will add a car hire,which requires increasing the size of the building. It is
also
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 planned a cafe and ATM
in
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on
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 the southern side of
premises
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the premises
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.
Furthermore
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,the primary proposed changes include replacing a walkway with a sky train track and building two branching corridors,which will allow passengers to access with more gates than now.
SEcurity
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Security
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 and customs passport
coltrols
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controls
control
 will be unchanged,
however
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 the future
airport
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places
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will place
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 shops directly after the
securitysection
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security section
 in the departures area. There are two planning charts of Southwest
Airport
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 which clearly show recent interior structures and redevelopment plans for the
airport
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 next year.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words airport with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
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