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The maps below show the changes that have taken place at Liverpool John Moore's University from 2010 to present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the changes that have taken place at Liverpool John Moore's University from 2010 to present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate the
moditications
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modifications
modification
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the
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Liverpool John Moore's University between 2010 and
present
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the present
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.
Overall
, it can be
Seen
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seen
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 that
the
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Liverpool John Moore's University undergoes
through
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many changes over the given period. Various facilities
founded
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 like
cafe
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a cafe
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 and IT suite.
To begin
 with, in 2010, There
are
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were
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 three different
building
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buildings
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namly
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namely
 (Biology, Chemistry and physics) in the north direction.
While in
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 the present time, all
the
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three buildings were removed and
established
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one huge building related to science study.
Moreover
, in the
north
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northwest
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west
 areas, there was
small
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a small
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 library in 2010. Now, the library
became
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has become
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 bigger and
IT
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an IT
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 suite
was
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has been
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 added.
Further more
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, in 2010, there was
road
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a road
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 inside the University with
cars
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 parking running from the east to the
west
.
In contrast
, the Car park area changed, it
become
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became
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cafe
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a cafe
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 and bus station in the
south
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southwest
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west
distination
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destination
 and
lecture
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a lecture
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 theatre in the east.
Also
, they changed the road to
footpath
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the footpath
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 and
change
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changed
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 some paths which
become
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became
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 opposite the Admin building and behind the Cale from the
west
 side.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words west with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
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