Write to the company’s manager about construction near your home. In your letter: * how you heard of their construction plans * what you think of their plans * your hopes for the construction in case it pushes through

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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heard from a reasonable person living next to my home, that your company is going to start construction of a plaza soon, near my home. I have some reservations about your plan,

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you already have completed all the requirements regarding

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project.

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, I would like to request you, please reconsider the construction time period. I know that the track record of the company is extraordinarily good in

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regard, But I think the period mentioned should be minimised as it could be.

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, I would like to inform you about the construction material quality. Please keep always a serious check in purchasing

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items.

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, I assure you on behalf of the people living here that we all are law-abiding and responsible citizens and would never create any hurdle in a

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public interest project like

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building in time so that people return to their normal life as soon as possible. Best regards. Yours Sincerely. Kunwar

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The letter maintains a respectful and suitable tone for addressing a company manager.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

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Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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