The table below gives information about students enrolments at bristol university in 1928, 1958, 2008

The table below gives information about students enrolments at bristol university in 1928, 1958, 2008
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The given table shows the exact data of enrolled
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at Bristol University from 1928 to 2008, which is divided based on gender and distance.
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, it is obvious that there was a significant increase in the total accumulation,
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the pattern of gender category fluctuated differently,
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the other categories changed in another way. The number of student enrolments experienced a considerable change, starting from 218
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to 6.377
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in 2008.
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, the proportion of females was
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smaller than males in 1928 and 1958,
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it escalated tremendously from 32% to 54%, which made the percentage larger than the male proportion.
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, the proportion of males started at 58% and rose to 68% in 1958, which was the highest number throughout the years before it went down to 46% in 2008. In terms of distance, the
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who were originally 30 miles away from Bristol Univesity, held the greatest percentage with 50% in 1928.
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, it decreased gradually and dramatically to around 1% until 2% in 2008.
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, the percentage of foreign
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, sharply ascended from 5% to 28%, which was primarily from 98 countries.
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