The table below provides information on rental charges and salaries in three areas of London. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

The table below provides information on rental charges and salaries in three areas of London.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The given table shows the rents of property per week in areas of London, namely, Notting
Hill
,
Regent
's
Park
,
Fulham
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and Fulham
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, and
salaries
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the salaries
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needed yearly.
Overall
,
it is clear that
Notting
Hill
accomodations
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accommodations
are highly priced
that is
why the
salary
needed is
also
high.
Whereas
Fulham has the lowest lease,
moreover
, the annual
salary
is
also
relatively
minimum
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minimal
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. There is not much difference in Notting
Hill
and
Regent
's
Park
rents, 1 bed cost less than 380, followed by
2 bed
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2-bed
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house cost 450 and 485 respectively. The
3 bed
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3-bed
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accomodation
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accommodation
charges of Notting
Hill
are relatively higher than others which is 738
and
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apply
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followed by
Regent
's
Park
3 bed
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3-bed
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place, with the difference of 88 by Notting
Hill
's room rent. The Notting Hills living is much more expensive than the other two areas, for 1 bed,
salary
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the salary
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required is 98,500 and for 2 and 3
bed
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beds
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the wages needed
is
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are
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127,500 and 194,000 respectively. For
Regent
's
Park
and Fulham's, the wages needed are almost similar where the most difference is in
1 bed
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1-bed
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room where the
salary
needed are 85,500 and 56,500 respectively.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words hill, regent, park, salary with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • rental charges
  • salaries
  • disparities
  • trends
  • analyze
  • unique features
  • stands out
  • implications
  • compares
  • observed
  • specific
  • figures
  • summarize
  • main findings
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