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Some people prefer to be nocturnal during exam days and go through the entire syllabus in the last few days, whereas others have regular habits, studying a little every day. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both studying patterns and choose which one is a better way of action according to you

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Education plays a vital role in every stage of life. A group of people do their
study
 a few days before the exams
nevertheless
, others have a habit of daily studying. Both have their own pros and cons which I will discuss in
this
 essay.I believe learning before the exam days is the best option.
To begin
 with, studying regularly is very crucial as it gives learners more
time
 to grab
wide
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 range of knowledge in detail. To elaborate , studying a single topic a day gives them more
time
 to person for learning more about that topic and
also
 gives them enough
time
 to get some extra knowledge related to that topic which eventually
help
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 them in the future
however
,
this
study
 takes a large amount of
time
 in a day and in the
end
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 leads to spare less
time
 for other curricular activities which affect the physical health. 
On the other hand
, those individuals who like to
study
 near exams are more proactive in
overall
 things like, they develop physical and mental growth blankly
as well as
also
 develop a great personality by performing tasks.
For instance
, people who spend
time
 outside in various activities Know how to deal with people and situations which is not tech by any textbook
whereas
, during a short
time
 of learning they only know about important things which makes them less confident and affects their exam scores in long run and make them weak in studies. In Conclusion, I believe education is important but other skills
also
 help a person to grow
up
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in their life and deal with daunting tasks of corporate deals so if a person daily gives
time
 to
study's
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 they heed to compromise with other skills that may be not helpful in future.
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The introduction clearly outlines the main topic and your stance on it, which provides a clear direction for the essay.
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The essay recognizes the importance of balancing study habits with other aspects of personal development, showing a good level of insight.

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