The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007.
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The line chart provides key information about the international
visitors
figures to the coast, mountains and lakes of a country in Europe from 1987 to 2007. The units are measured in
visitors
number
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numbers
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.
Overall
, the graph clearly shows that the
number
of overseas tourists to the coast rapidly increased by 1992.
In addition
, the lakes peaked in 2002 and
then
experienced a notable decrease,
whereas
the mountains witnessed a steady
rose
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over the years.
According to
what is shown the international tourists figure to the coast significantly rose from approximately 35 thousand to nearly 75 thousand between 1992 and 2007. In 1997 to almost half of 2002, the lakes’ international
visitors
number
increased considerably from 40,000 to around 75,000
visitors
. Afterwards, it experienced a significant decline in
visitors
number
, as it reached 50,000 in 2007. In terms of the mountains’
visitors
, the figures for
visitors
steadily increased from 1987 with 20,000 to 2007 with around 35,000, and from about the middle of 1997 to almost the end of 2002, it remained constant with 30,000
visitors
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • overseas visitors
  • number of
  • areas
  • European country
  • between
  • 1987 and 2000
  • graph
  • introduce
  • overview
  • trends
  • describe
  • analyze
  • compare and contrast
  • summarize
  • main findings
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