The line graph gives information about the number of Iranian, Greek and Turkish students who enrolled at Sheffield University between 2005 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the
number
of Iranian, Greek and Turkish Use synonyms
students
who enrolled at Sheffield University in the Use synonyms
year
2005 to 2009.
The Use synonyms
number
of Greek Use synonyms
students
who enrolled at Sheffield University experienced a significant decrease between the Use synonyms
Use synonyms
year
2005 and 2009. There were
approximately 180 Fix the agreement mistake
years
greek
Capitalize word
Greek
students
Use synonyms
who
enrolled in the Correct pronoun usage
apply
year
2005, but the Use synonyms
number
of enrolment kept decreasing in the Use synonyms
year
2006 until the Use synonyms
year
2007 but remained stable between the Use synonyms
year
2007 and 2008 at around 70 enrolments. Use synonyms
Linking Words
Finally
in the Add a comma
Finally,
year
2009, it decreased again to only around 45 enrolments.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the two other countries experienced Linking Words
a
stable growth between the Correct article usage
apply
Use synonyms
year
2005 and 2009. The Fix the agreement mistake
years
number
of Iranian Use synonyms
students
went up from approximately 40 in 2005 to 160 in 2009. Turkey Use synonyms
also
experienced a stable growth from less than 25 Linking Words
students
in 2005 to around 120 Use synonyms
students
in 2009.
In conclusion, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
students
from Use synonyms
greece
who enrolled experienced a significant decrease between the Change the capitalization
Greece
Use synonyms
year
2005 and 2009, Fix the agreement mistake
years
while
the Linking Words
number
of Iranian and Turkish Use synonyms
students
experienced an increase Use synonyms
between
the same Change preposition
in
year
.Use synonyms
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