The graph gives information about drinking habits of the US population by age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph provides information about percentages of drinking habits by people in
United
States based on Correct article usage
the United
age
perspective.
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Overall
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the graph, most of the US human habits are never drinking. Linking Words
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, the never-drinker population is above 50% to 60% any Correct your spelling
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ages
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age
of 64-74 society.
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, the most significant feature increase in ex-drinkers. It is about 5% nearly to 10% for young adults. Linking Words
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groups
, it experienced upward to about 20% population. There is Use synonyms
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the constancy of the light drinkers for the Linking Words
age
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16-24 and 25-34 that has around 25%-35% and decreased for the other Use synonyms
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of 35-44 and 45-54 with over a 10% than the other Use synonyms
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In conclusion, there are fluctuating total Use synonyms
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drinking habits of the US population by Change preposition
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