The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school now.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates the difference between a school in 1985 and currently. Generally, the school became receiving more students, and because of building more classrooms.
On the
one
hand, the school is now bigger, and the southwest part of - Use synonyms
playingthe
playing field removed and substituted by the fitness centre and swimming pool. Correct your spelling
playing the
Additionally
, the library is now more organized it is composed of regular resources and electronic devices. The total number of classrooms increased Linking Words
one
added & southern to the previous Use synonyms
one
it the removed part from playing fields, and the third Use synonyms
one
is located north of the pool and fitness centre. Use synonyms
Although
, parking is oval in shape Linking Words
instead
of square shape.
Linking Words
While
in 1985 playing fields were bigger, it had extra parking beside the library. Linking Words
And there
was a road connecting playing fields with Correct word choice
There
main
roads.Correct article usage
the main
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