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The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school now.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school now.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map illustrates the difference between a school in 1985 and currently. Generally, the school became receiving more students, and because of building more classrooms. On the
one
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 hand, the school is now bigger, and the southwest part of -
playingthe
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playing the
 playing field removed and substituted by the fitness centre and swimming pool.
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, the library is now more organized it is composed of regular resources and electronic devices. The total number of classrooms increased
one
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 added & southern to the previous
one
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 it the removed part from playing fields, and the third
one
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 is located north of the pool and fitness centre.
Although
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, parking is oval in shape
instead
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 of square shape.
While
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 in 1985 playing fields were bigger, it had extra parking beside the library.
And there
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There
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 was a road connecting playing fields with
main
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the main
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 roads.

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