In the modern era,advertisements are extremely popular,they are being widely used on social platforms.
While
some argue that because of advertising,they purchase numerous unnecessary items,others believe that it plays a vital role in announcing new products.Two aforementioned opinions will be discussed in the following paragraphs before presenting my personal perspective in the conclusion.
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To begin
,there is a common belief that advertisements are considered necessary in announcing brand-new goods.Linking Words
Firstly
,advertising is beneficial for consumers.Linking Words
For example
,producers often create attractive videos with product data or organize presentations,and workshops in order to buyers a good understanding of the items Linking Words
which
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Moreover
,through advertising,products reach more customers leading to increased sales.
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On the other hand
, I strongly believe that advertisements lead many individuals to make inessential purchases.The first reason is that advertisers employed a wide range of strategies to captivate consumers and drive sales Linking Words
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as employing celebritiesLinking Words
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and publishing limited editions.Remove the comma
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For example
, Son Tung M-TP one of Vietnam’s most famous and influential singers,is the brand ambassador for Viettel.Thanks to him,the company has attracted a large number of users.Linking Words
Furthermore
,people often like to show off and peer pressure can make them feel like they need to keep up with others.Linking Words
For instance
,in a survey at Tran Nguyen Han High School,most students want to get newly launched meẻchandises because of its luxurious,cutting-edge technology or their friends have those items so they must have them as well.
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although
advertisement is extremely essential in informing new products,it still has certain disadvantages.Linking Words
Therefore
,buyer should be properly aware of their purchases and only buy when needed.Linking Words
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