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The below table shows information and prediction regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.

The below table shows information and prediction regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.
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The table provides data on the change rate of the population aged 65 in 1988, and 2000 and predictions for 2030.
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, it is evident that the shift in the ratio of elderly citizens saw a considerable increase in
Canada
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 and
Germany
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,
whereas
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this
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 figure for the
UK
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 observed a modest growth over the period.
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, it is forecasted that all statistics will experience a significant rise by 2030. Looking in more detail, the highest alteration rate was in
Germany
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 in 1988 at 20,45%,
while
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 the second biggest one was in
Canada
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 at approximately 16.32%. In terms of the lowest percentage change, it was seen in the
UK
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 at around 14%. The alteration in the percentage of senior citizens in
Germany
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 was higher than in
Canada
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, with roughly 25% compared to 20.67% in 2000.
In contrast
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 to other countries, which experienced a dramatic increase,
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 figure in the
UK
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 increased by 14.89% in 2000. With regard to future estimations for 2030, the variation in the proportion of the population aged 65 will rise by 30.42% in
Germany
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, becoming the highest rate as opposed to other countries. When it comes to the remaining regions, it is predicted that the percentage of senior citizens in the
UK
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 will be lower than in
Canada
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, with values of 20.35% and 26.35%, respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words canada, germany, uk with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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