The graph below shows the consumption of three spreads from 1981 to 2007
The line graph illustrates the amount of three kinds of spreads (margarine, low fat & reduced spreads, and butter) which were consumed between 1981 and 2007. Taking a look at the parameters given to describe the data, it can be seen that the graph is divided into the X-axis and Y-axis, where X shows years with an interval of five years. The data is calibrated in
grams
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Overall
, it can be seen that there was a general downward trend in the utilization of spreads, albeit to varying degrees.
In 1981, butter was by far the most popular spread with consumption of just over 140 Linking Words
grams
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then
it hit a peak of 160 Linking Words
grams
in 1986 and still being the most utilised spread. After that, it started to decrease and dropped to nearly 50 Use synonyms
grams
in the year 2007.
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In contrast
, roughly 90 Linking Words
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of margarine was used in the first year and it slightly decreased by 10 per cent in 1986 followed by a sharp increase to 100 Use synonyms
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in 1991. Use synonyms
Then
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this
value remained stable till 1996 and it decreased through the remaining period with the value of 40 Linking Words
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in 2007, which is lower than butter. Use synonyms
Finally
, low fat and reduced spreads were the least used Linking Words
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in 1996, it enjoyed a huge rise and reached its peak at just over 80 Use synonyms
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in 2001 followed by a slow decline to 70 Use synonyms
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in 2007.Use synonyms
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