Some people say that high taxes are necessary so that the government will have enough money to provide good public services for the population. However, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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feel that high
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are necessary so that the
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will have
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enough
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declare that high
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are necessary so that the
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enough
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to give good public
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good. They are not realizing that there are most
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who do not have enough
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their daily life and
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with
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opinion.
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in
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. they must think how the steps to make a
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of
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become the affluent family.
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skills.
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achieve a decent standard of living, the
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can implement the requirement for
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to pay high
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so that
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can receive good public
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. In conclusion, most
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feel that
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must pay high
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taxes
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to get good public service, on the
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disagree with
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of poor
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coherence cohesion
Improve sentence construction and avoid repetitive phrases to enhance readability.
task achievement
Ensure all arguments are clearly explained and supported with specific examples or evidence.
coherence cohesion
Revise for grammatical and spelling errors, especially words like 'enogh' and 'society', to ensure the essay is polished.
coherence cohesion
You've effectively included both an introduction and a conclusion, which frame your discussion well.
task achievement
Your essay attempts to balance both perspectives before presenting a concluded view.
task achievement
The intention to discuss the financial impact of taxes on different income groups is a valuable point.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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