The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
The pie chart illustrates
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the destination
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specific
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the table depicts the incomes of the anthropologists in Linking Words
work
after five years.
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of
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graduates
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worker
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workers
while
the least number of Linking Words
graduates
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work
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years
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work
, anthropologists earn the highest salaries if they Change preposition
of work
work
in Use synonyms
government
sector.
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the government
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the pie graph, when students graduate from one university of Anthropology branch , they become full-time Linking Words
worker
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percent
. Working in Change the spelling
per cent
part-time
job is more common than Correct article usage
a part-time
unemployed
rate by 3%. Add an article
the unemployed
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graduates
at 8 Use synonyms
percent
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per cent
come
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comes
work
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together with
postgrad study at 5%.
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40% of freelance consultants can earn from 75,000 to over 100.000 Linking Words
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dollar
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dollars
while
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sector
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dollar
after 5 Change to a plural noun
dollars
years'
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years
working
. 35% of private Change preposition
of working
companies'
workers have Correct your spelling
companies
income
between 50 thousand Correct article usage
an income
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dollar
and 74,999 Change to a plural noun
dollars
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dollar
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dollars
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