Today people are travelling more than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?
At present, travelling is more popular than it was in the past.
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essay will discuss that Linking Words
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is because nowadays flying is cheaper and that the benefits of travelling are learning about new cultures and experiencing new adventures.
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are travelling more than ever because flying has become more Use synonyms
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is because now there are many low-cost airline companies that offer cheap flight tickets to Linking Words
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several countries, and Use synonyms
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did not exist two decades ago. Linking Words
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have the opportunity to travel to new places without spending a huge amount of money, Use synonyms
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in the past flying was only affordable for rich Linking Words
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For example
, Ryanair is a low-cost company that provides extremely cheap flight tickets to Linking Words
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countries around Europe, sometimes for the cost of 10 euros.
One benefit of travelling is that Use synonyms
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can learn about other countries’ Use synonyms
culture
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cultures
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a new nation, they go to local shops, eat typical food and Use synonyms
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museums where they can learn about the history of that country. Another advantage that travelling has is that travellers can live new adventures. Use synonyms
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who travel often choose to do activities that they cannot do in their own country. Use synonyms
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, is very common for travellers that Linking Words
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South Africa to do a safari in Kruger, one of the biggest national parks to Use synonyms
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wild animals in the world, since Use synonyms
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is an activity that most countries do not offer.
In conclusion, travelling has become more popular because flying is cheaper than it was in the past and the Linking Words
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that Fix the agreement mistake
advantage
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gives to travellers is the possibility to learn about new cultures and experience new adventures.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...