The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist work after five years.

The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist work after five years.
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The pie chart gives a breakdown of the proportion of six different job categories that Anthropology graduates from one university are employed after they finish their undergraduate degree course. The table depicts the salaries of the anthropologists in
work
during five years.
Overall
, full-time
work
was the most popular among other types of jobs,
while
the government sector had gained the highest salaries after 5 years. More than half of the total students tended to have full-time
work
with 52%. Part-time
work
and unemployed were second and third with 15 and 12 respectively. Full-time postgrad study and unknown job had equal percentages at 8%,
while
the percentages of students who had part-time
work
and studied postgrad was the lowest at 5%. As far as salaries of anthology graduates are concerned, freelance consultants and the government sector earning 25,000 -49,999$ and 50,000-74,000$ were 5% and 15% collectively,
while
the former had increased a similar amount for 75,000- 99,999 $ at 40%.
However
, the latter for earning 75,000 – 99,000$ was 30% and for earning 100,000$ was 50%. The private companies had a fluctuating rate between 10 to 35%.
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