In the past, sporting champions used to be motivated primarily by the desire to win a match or to break world records. These days, they are more likely to be motivated by prize money and the opportunity to be famous. What message does this send to young people and how does this attitude to sport affect the sports themselves? Give reasons for your answer.

Sporting champions used to be motivated by the desire

of

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success and being in

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the guiness

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guiness

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Guinness

business

book,the world

records'book

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records

however

,nowadays,they tend to be more and more encouraged by

money

and celebrity.

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attitude

influence

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young people and

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sports

.

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essay will examine the effects of

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behavior

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on youth and

sports

. The greed

of

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money

by

sportmen

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sportsmen

tend

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to change the way that sport used to be and the purposes of

sports

.

Sports

are

firstly

a

passion

for their

praticers

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practices

practice

and it is the

passion

that permits them to make more and more efforts,to give the best of themselves without

never

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giving up.The new generation will be motivated only by

money

and it will be difficult for them to achieve the same results

like

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the former

sportmen

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sportsmen

that

have

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motivated by

passion

. The youth will tend to lose the

love

of sport and will see it just as a

mean

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to earn their life.

Consequently

,sport will lose its primary goals which are to gather people,to make them enjoy and to create social links.

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illustration

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,some teens start to play soccer just to be famous,to meet their favourite

soccer's

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soccer

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player

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players

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and to become

wealth

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even

they

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do not

love

soccer.

Sportmen

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Sportsmen

will less and less break world records

therefore

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sports level

will tend to decrease gradually.

Instead

of being encouraged by their

passion

to exceed their limits,the new generation of

sportmen

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sportsmen

will just want to end the competitions to get their

money

. The

sports

will be

less

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sociable activity

,

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because the

sportmen

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sportsmen

do not try to create links with each other and with their fans.

To conclude

,the performance of the new generation of

sportmen

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sportsmen

will be reduced

due to

the lack of

passion

and

love

.The

sports

will tend to lose some of their values like sociability,gathering and mutual

love

among

praticers

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practices

practicers

and with their supporters.