The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the US from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparions where relevant.
The line graph provided above depicts the proportions of homes in the US having five various modern facilities for a five-year period spanning from 1995.
It can be seen that more and more households had bought all equipment, but the
phone
trend was the one with the most rapid growth, and washing
machine maintained its position as the most omnipresent tool.
Regarding the less used technologies, in 1995, Correct article usage
the washing
DVD
player stood at over 20%, with a remarkable fall, it reached a trough of almost 15 per cent, the lowest per cent of allCorrect article usage
the DVD
,
before it experienced a considerable upward trend. The rate of households owning both the Remove the comma
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internet
and phone
rose from 10% and slightly under 20% respectively, to almost 20%, but they had different positive gradients afterwards, the proportion of the
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internet
owners increased less rapidly than that of Add an article
the phone
phone
. In 1998, houses Fix the agreement mistake
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with
phone
were one and a half times more than those with the Fix the agreement mistake
phones
internet
. Consequently
, while
the trend of phone
soared abruptly and overtook Fix the agreement mistake
phones
computer's
line by the Correct article usage
the computer's
last
year,second
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the second
widely
used tool in homes, only two-fifths of houses Correct quantifier usage
most widely
connected
to the Add a missing verb
are connected
internet
.
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computers
machine
, beginning at 40% and 60% respectively, they saw a considerable permanent rise over the period. washing machine kept its position as the most used tool at homes in the Fix the agreement mistake
machines
last
year.Submitted by faraisam33 on
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