The charts below show the proportion of people’s total spending in a particular European country was spent on different commodities and services in 1958 and in 2008.

The charts below show the proportion of people’s total spending in a particular European country was spent on different commodities and services in 1958 and in 2008.
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The given pie charts compare data about the percentage of money that the population in an especially European country had to invest in 6 various parts at two points in time namely, 1958 and 2008.
Overall
, the fraction of all items other than Luxury goods, travel, and housing reduced over the period of a half-century.
According to
the diagrams, Food, the main section that had the highest portion of spending in the one European country in 1958, formed just under one-third in the beginning;
then
in 2008, it 20% fell from the prior time.
While
housing, the best sector in 2008, climbed from 22% in 1958 to 32% in 2008. Clothing did not change visually owing to the fact that it declined from 18% in 1958 to 16% in 2008. The graphs demonstrate that at the start, Entertainment composed 13%;
thereafter
, it went down to a small fraction in 2008.
In contrast
, in 1958 travel and Luxury goods constituted roughly the same proportion at just under 10% after that, they rose to the same portion at 17% in 2008.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • expenditure
  • commodities
  • services
  • necessities
  • luxury goods
  • trends
  • significant changes
  • expenditure
  • housing and utilities
  • summarize
  • highlight
  • primary trends
  • fifty-year period
  • economic growth
  • technological advancements
  • societal values
  • analyze
  • observe
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