The two maps below show a small village in the west of Ireland in the year 2000 and at the present.

The two maps below show a small village in the west of Ireland in the year 2000 and at the present.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show a small village in the west of Ireland in the year 2000 and at the present.
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The given two maps illustrate a small
village
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in the west
side
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of Ireland in the year 2000 and the present.
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, it is noticeable from the two maps that the
village
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of Ireland experienced some development,
while
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some areas remained the same. The housing expanded and the farmland
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replaced by a park. In 2000,
in
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on
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the east
side
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of the
village
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, there was
a
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farmland. The housing area is
at
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in
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the middle of the
village
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divided by a footpath. On the left
side
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of the housing, there were some shops and on the opposite
side
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of the shop, there was a market crossing the road. On the other
side
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of the road, there was a hotel. At present, the housing arrangement expanded compared to 2000, and on the opposite
side
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of the road, on the north
side
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, there are expanded housing facilities. Meanwhile, the market is replaced by some restaurants.
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, the farmland is replaced by a park with some trees. The dock of the river has been removed at present.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words village, side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 3 times.
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