The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned

future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate a manufacturing
area
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in the city of Norbition, and
plan
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the plan
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of the site in the
futuring
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future
.
Overall
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, the main difference is that
industrial
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the industrial
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area
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will change into
the
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a
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residential
area
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with some minor
changed
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changes
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in facilities and public services.
Firstly
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, the map shows future developments.
River
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The river
A river
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which is located
in
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on
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the north side will not
changed
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change
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,but the bridge will constructed above the river.
Secondly
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, the factory
area
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will
be rebuild
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be rebuilt
be rebuilding
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for housing purposes and there
are
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will be
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no
changed
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changes
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in the town.
In
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On
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the southeast side of
this
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area
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will build
roundabout
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a roundabout
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.Farmland which was located near the river will be situated
in
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on
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the north-east side of
reconstructed
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the reconstructed
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area
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. In the proposed plan,
roundabout
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the roundabout
a roundabout
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will be renovated with new three sides in the middle of the road .
Additionally
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, there are
new
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a new
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entertainment
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area
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areas
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,playground shops and new buildings
as
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such as
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school
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a school
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and medical
center
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centre
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. These changes aim to accommodate the increasing population in Norbition by providing essential facilities and ensuring a more family-friendly environment.
This
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is how
this
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development site will be transformed in the near future.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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