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Most people think that the truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to the news. Do you think all news is true? What is the function of a newspaper?

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A large number of people believe that the
news
 should be objective rather than subjective. In my opinion, not every
news
 is true and most newspapers present distorted details in many stories.
Nevertheless
, the primary function of a newspaper is to provide authentic information
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 events. I believe that we have entered the age of fake
news
 and alternative facts. Many influential journals operate under political influence or aim to maximize financial returns by distorting information on public topics. Politically,
news
 media have become instruments of advertising. By spreading rumours and adverse stories about political opponents. Financially, newspaper stories are manipulated to attract attention, allowing them to earn more from advertising contracts. Indeed,
this
 phenomenon has led to
distortion
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 of the original function of multimedia channels. The primary function of journalism is to
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 realistic
news
 that helps audiences understand
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current events and how to avoid or mitigate adverse effects.
Additionally
, a crucial aim of journalism is to foster societal development by publishing positive
news
, which is the cornerstone of any society. In conclusion, I believe that most
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 today are influenced by political or financial interests, distorting their original good intentions.
This
 phenomenon differs significantly from the original purpose of journalism, which is to provide authentic information
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 events.
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Try to provide more examples to illustrate your points, especially about how newspapers distort details.
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Include a bit more explanation or evidence for why you believe news media are influenced by politics or financial interests.
task achievement
The essay addresses both questions and provides a clear viewpoint.
coherence cohesion
Good introduction and conclusion framing the response well.
coherence cohesion
The response is logically structured and ideas flow in a coherent manner.

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • objective reporting
  • subjective interpretation
  • media bias
  • misinformation
  • journalistic integrity
  • editorial standards
  • fact-checking
  • watchdog role
  • public opinion
  • newsworthy
  • ethical journalism
  • credible sources
  • press freedom
  • sensationalism
  • media literacy
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