The first graph shows the number of train passengers from 2000 to 2009. The second graph shows the percentage of trains running on time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Two line graphs show information that allows to analyse whether the amount of passagers is strictly correlated with the percentage of

trains

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running on

time

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in the period between the years 2000 and 2009.

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, we can observe that regardless

trains

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being punctual the number of clients is fluctuating throughout the researched period.

Firstly

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, between 2000 and 2002 the target was constantly below expected.

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, the demand for tickets increased.

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, between 2005 and 2006 there was a rapid downturn trend. It was around 3% per cent less of

trains

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being on

time

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within a year.

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, the number of tickets sold went down only around 5 milion.

On the other hand

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, there were moments of

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running before

time

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. From 2002 to 2005

trains

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were arriving in advance. In the same

time

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it was the moment that the number of passengers went down.

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, we may assume it is better for the train industry to be late rather than ealier.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

161 words

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