The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
The table illustrates how many
vistors
visited Ashdown Museum during the Correct your spelling
visitors
year
before and the year
after its refurbishment, While
the pie charts depict the result of questionnairs
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questionnaires
questionnaire
visitors
how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
Overall
, it seems that the total number
of visitors
is
increased after the renewal of the museum. Meanwhile, the Verb problem
has
number
of satisfied visitors
also
saw a significant rise showing that changes were in their favour.
If we look at the details, 74000 visitors
visited the museum during the year
before its development. After the changes occurred, the number
rocketted
to 92000. Regarding the results of the surveys, in the Correct your spelling
rocketed
year
before the refurbishment, 15% of the respondants
said they were very satisfied Correct your spelling
respondents
in
their visiting Change preposition
with
experince
. Whilst, there were 35% with the same feeling in the Correct your spelling
experience
year
after. Moreover
, around one third
of the participants were satisfied in the first Add a hyphen
one-third
year
but the number
increased to 40% in the year
after. Furthermore
, the dissatisfied populity
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popularity
populism
were plummeted
from 40% to 15% after the Change to the active voice
plummeted
have plummeted
occurance
of the rebuilding.Correct your spelling
occurrence
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