You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates the different levels of
air
pollution
categorized into three factors, electricity
generation
, transport and industry
, among four countries in 2021.
Overall
, at first glance, China had the highest level of air
pollution
, compared to other nations. While
Australia stood in the first position, in terms of producing the lowest air
pollution
, electricity
generation
caused the least amount of air
pollution
.
It is evident that in China industry
sector created 80 ppm
of pollution
, the highest level of air
pollution
. Although
electricity
generation
and transport in China produced nearly 60 ppm
and 70 ppm
, respectively, in America they were 30 ppm
and almost 60 ppm
in that period. Moreover
, the amount of air
pollution
related to the industry
sector in America was similar to that of the transport sector in Japan, at 30 ppm
.
Conversely
, in Japan despite producing the highest amount of air
pollution
in industry
, electricity
generation
caused approximately 15 ppm
. Additionally
, in Australia, all sectors produced similar amounts of air
pollution
, almost 20 ppm
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Vocabulary: Replace the words air, pollution, electricity, generation, industry, ppm with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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