The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the
people
who live in New Use synonyms
zealand
in two Change the capitalization
Zealand
diffrent
years by age Correct your spelling
different
of
group.
Change preposition
apply
Overall
,As Linking Words
it
is shown,In 2011 and 2012 Correct pronoun usage
apply
people
Use synonyms
from
all ages Change preposition
of
are
Wrong verb form
were
on
the top of the table.Leading that,Change preposition
at
People
who are 15-39 comes at the Use synonyms
secound
place.Correct your spelling
second
Last
but not Linking Words
lest
,Correct your spelling
least
People
who are aged 65 and above Use synonyms
comes
at the Correct subject-verb agreement
come
last
place on Linking Words
this
table.
On the one hand,In 2011 Linking Words
people
who are from all ages were 4.381.269 Use synonyms
the
Remove the article
apply
they
increased by about 0.6 per cent in 2012.Correct pronoun usage
which
Furthermore
,kids aged under 15 Linking Words
for
both 2011 and 2012 had Change preposition
in
aproximately
the same number but with a slight Correct your spelling
approximately
diffrent
Correct your spelling
different
difference
by
about 0.2%.Change preposition
of
Also
,teenagers and adults in 2012 Linking Words
are
less Wrong verb form
were
Linking Words
then
Replace the word
than
2011
by 0.2 per cent.
In detail,grownups who are 40-64 Change preposition
in 2011
was
1,331,907 in 2011 and it had increased in 2012 to reach 1.339.898 so it has rose by 0.6%.Correct subject-verb agreement
were
Moreover
,For the 65 and above it has grown by Linking Words
aboy
4.0 per cent.Correct your spelling
about
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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