Postponing marriage till
thirties
seems to have become a trend for our generation nowadays. Change the article
the thirties
Although
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get
married at an early stage of Wrong verb form
getting
life
has many advantages, I still consider that delaying marriage is more beneficial for couples.
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for
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on
people
. On the individual level, the older you are, the higher Use synonyms
infertile
rates you have. As Correct article usage
the infertile
people
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getting
older, their body's function starts to gradually decline, lowering the chance of having children. Japan, Wrong verb form
get
for instance
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due to
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fearness
of taking care of their children when married. Correct your spelling
fairness
fearless
Additionally
, older Linking Words
people
will have less energy dealing with physically demanding activities without the help of their children.
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However
, one of the primary advantages of Linking Words
this
trend is the financial stability that middle-aged Linking Words
people
have achieved through their Use synonyms
career
. In Fix the agreement mistake
careers
this
stage of Linking Words
life
, the majority of Use synonyms
people
will have the ability Use synonyms
dealing
with financial problems and healthcare access which is essential for their family. Change the verb form
to deal
Moreover
, individuals who marry later in Linking Words
life
are often Use synonyms
emtionally
mature and fully prepared for their Correct your spelling
emotionally
family
. They are more likely to gain valuable experiences and problem-solving skills from Fix the agreement mistake
families
life
. A suitable example Use synonyms
for
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of
these
is that the Vietnamese Correct pronoun usage
this
financially
economic survey in 2014 Change the word
financial
have
shown that younger couples tend to have Correct subject-verb agreement
has
higher
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a higher
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divorce
rate
than older ones.
In conclusion, though society has sparked Fix the agreement mistake
rates
controveries
about Correct your spelling
controversies
controversy
married-related
problems, I still believe that they are outweighed by the advantages, Correct your spelling
marriage-related
while
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this
trend offered enough time for couples Linking Words
enhancing
their financial Change the verb form
to enhance
securities
and emotional Fix the agreement mistake
security
mature
.Replace the word
maturity
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