The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provides information on
output
of various kinds of non-renewable Add an article
the output
energy
production
in UK
in a span of twenty years. Correct article usage
the UK
Overall
, energy
source production
differs according to
its type.
According to
the diagram, petroleum contributed to the largest fuel production
, starting just above 80 in 1981 before surged
significantly to almost 140 in 1984. Afterwards, petroleum Wrong verb form
surging
output
remained constant at 140 except from 1990 to 1992 there was decline
to 100.
Correct article usage
a decline
Next
Correct article usage
The next
energy
source, which is coal, showed a sharp declining trend from 80 in 1981 dropped
to just below 40 in 1984. Though there was Verb problem
apply
increment
to around 60 from 1986 to 1991, coal Correct article usage
an increment
production
dropped further
thereafter
and remained constant at just below 40 till 2000.
Lastly
natural gas Add a comma
Lastly,
output
remained constant for 10 years duration at around 40 until 1991 where
there was Correct word choice
when
gradual
increase Add an article
a gradual
of
Change preposition
in
output
to approximately 100 in 2000.
In conclusion, non-renewable energy
production
for petroleum and natural gas remained high for past
twenty years except for coal Correct article usage
the past
that
considerably decreased.Correct pronoun usage
which
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