The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.

the map shows

Garlsdon

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town

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,

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and two possible locations for a supermarket to

be build

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in.

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, the

supermarkets

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location is

ment

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meant

to

be build

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either in the middle of the

town

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or in its countryside.

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, the map shows that there are three cities near

Garlsdon

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with

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population

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, railway and main

roads

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locations.

Garlsdon

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town

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having a

population

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of 65000 is located in the south-east of Hindon

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by 12 Km which has 10000 people living in it.

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in the south-west of

Garlsdon

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there is Bransdon

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distance with 16Km with a

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of 15000.

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25Km

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25 km

south-east

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southeast

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of

Garlsdon

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there is Cransdon with 29000

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. the first location is planned to be in the focal area of

Garlsdon

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town

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, just at the southern area of the railway, surrounded by

indusrtial

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industrial

and housing

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.

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the other site is to be north-west of

town

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in the countryside. approximately, between Hindon and Bransdon.