The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
the map shows
Garlsdon
town
,
and two possible locations for a supermarket to Remove the comma
apply
be build
in.
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be built
overall
, the supermarkets
location is Change to a genitive case
supermarket's
supermarkets'
ment
to Correct your spelling
meant
be build
either in the middle of the Change the verb form
be built
town
or in its countryside. moreover
, the map shows that there are three cities near Garlsdon
with smaller
Add an article
a smaller
population
, railway and main roads
locations.
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road
Garlsdon
town
having a population
of 65000 is located in the south-east of Hindon town
by 12 Km which has 10000 people living in it. also
in the south-west of Garlsdon
there is Bransdon town
distance with 16Km with a population
of 15000. whereas
, 25Km
Correct your spelling
25 km
south-east
of Correct your spelling
southeast
Garlsdon
there is Cransdon with 29000 population
.
the first location is planned to be in the focal area of Garlsdon
town
, just at the southern area of the railway, surrounded by indusrtial
and housing Correct your spelling
industrial
area
. Fix the agreement mistake
areas
while
,
the other site is to be north-west of Remove the comma
apply
town
in the countryside. approximately, between Hindon and Bransdon.Submitted by tareq.kj on
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