A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/She asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to ur friend and in your letter: . Give details of course you took at university . Explain why you recommend the university . Give some advice about how to apply.

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Dear Maninder, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing
this
letter with context to your decision
of taking
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a Bachelors
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Bachelors
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Business Administration course
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Perth
University
. I did my Masters in Business Administration from
this
renowned
institue
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institute
Institue
back in 2014. It was a
two years
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full time
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course, which taught me advanced concepts of doing business and handling
paper work
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. Perth
University
is a very highly rated institution in Australia, because of its infrastructure and experienced faculty. It is very popular among local
as well as
overseas students. There are a number of reasons to opt
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college. First and foremost,
this
institute uses
latest
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gadgets to teach.
Furthermore
, the library is equipped with
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versions of study materials.
Moreover
,
university
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has
tie
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up with a few companies, where they send pupils for internships.
Lastly
,
this
college has almost 96 per cent of placement ratio,
hence
most likely you will leave the
institue
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institute
with a job in your hand. There are a number of ways to apply for
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admission.
Firsty
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First
, you can physically visit the Admissions Office and fill an admission
foam
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.
Secondly
, you can use online mode by visiting Perth
University
's official website. I hope
this
information is useful to you and if required I can assist you on
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. I wish best of luck to you and I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours lovingly, jatinder.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • subject
  • course
  • recommend
  • university
  • advice
  • apply
  • application
  • study
  • experience
  • knowledge
  • career
  • enrollment
  • deadline
  • support
  • resources
  • faculty
  • campus
  • facilities
  • network
  • scholarships
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