Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, we hear many news and information about environmental changes. Some people believe the most important environmental problem is the
loss
of special species
of plants
and animals
while
others are not on the same page and they think there are more important matters. In this
essay, I will discuss both views and present my own notion.
On the one hand, believing the main environment
issue comes from Replace the word
environmental
loss
of Add an article
the loss
a loss
species
can consider
reasonable in some Wrong verb form
be considered
people
views. Lossing different kinds of Change noun form
people's
animals
and plants
can impact on
other animal's life. Change preposition
apply
For example
, if an animal failed
to find her/his Wrong verb form
fails
foods
,Fix the agreement mistake
food
beacuse
they are no more Correct your spelling
because
exist
, the life cycle of Correct subject-verb agreement
exists
this
animal will change and this
can results
in more Change the verb form
result
number of
Correct quantifier usage
apply
species
loss
. Moreover
, as we know all animals
have their own predators, so loss
of the predators can cause changes in Add an article
the loss
a loss
nature
balance . Change noun form
nature's
For example
, consider snakes as predators of mouses
, if we Replace the word
mice
loss
snakes there will be Replace the word
lose
huge
number of Add an article
a huge
mouses
on the earth which can hurt nature and humans.
Replace the word
mice
On the other hand
, there are other issues which consider
more important in other views . One of these problems is the high amount of CO2 emissions which cause global warming and air Wrong verb form
are considered
pollutions
, Fix the agreement mistake
pollution
this
can also
lead to loose of some species
. For instance
, air pollutions
can impact Fix the agreement mistake
pollution
on
many Change preposition
apply
animals
and plants
. In addition
, it has huge effects on human's
health. Change noun form
human
Furthermore
, other
environmental problem is the huge number of constructions and city developments which Change the wording
another
results
in deforesting and cutting so many trees Correct subject-verb agreement
result
also
destroying many species
habitat.
To summarize, lossing
Correct your spelling
losing
species
of plants
and animals
can cause some negative effects on nature. However
, I personally think there are more significant environmental issues which mostly coming
from Wrong verb form
come
human's
actions.Change noun form
human
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