In many places, new homes are needed, but only spaces available for building them in the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

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of

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new houses

to live

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has

been

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increase

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due to

the

risen

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of

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population in many countries. The number of

availabe

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available

spaces for building a new

residencial

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residential

area only

occur

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in the

countryside

. I argue if

this

problem could not be

be

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solve

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immediately with a suitable solution,

this

might lead to a long-term issue. On one hand, the phenomenon of

over-population

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overpopulation

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has been happening all over the world. Mainly. places that

affected

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by

this

problem is a

city

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cities

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especially major cities as the

center

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of

economy

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.

However

, the demand

of

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accomodation

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accommodation

for the people living in the

city

increasing

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throughout the year, whilst there

is

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no available

spaces

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to

fulfill

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the demand. As a

results

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, many individuals started buying their property in

a

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countryside

as the only available option at the moment.

Consecuently

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Consequently

,

this

likely will lead to

a disparities

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disparities

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in the

economy

of the

city

and

countryside

. If most of the people

living

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in the

countryside

,

whereas

they work in the

city

, the local

economy

of the town will be impacted significantly by the rate of employment and the living

expanses

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expenses

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.

On the other hand

,

this

also

could be beneficial for the local

economy

to

promt

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promote

prompt

the advancement of the region. If the government could create a scheme for migration from the

city

to the

countryside

as well as

to develop the livelihood and welfare of its people,

this

might be one of the

solutive

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solution

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to handle the problems of over-population in the big cities.

To sum up

, I believe the problems of highly demanding

accomodation

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accommodation

in a

city

could be solved by

transmigration

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the transmigration

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of the

citizen

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citizens

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to the

countryside

.

However

,

this

should be done in conjunction with the development of the region.