The bar chart shows the percentage of young people in higher education in 2000, 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the percentage of young people in higher education in 2000, 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart compares data about the portion of young generations who had high education in 4 various countries from 200 to 2010.
Overall
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, it was important that the trends of all countries other than
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B increased over the period of one decade.
According to
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the diagram,
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D, the main
country
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that had the largest portion of youth high educators at all times, hit nearly 45% in the beginning,
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it rose moderately to 60% in 2010.
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B and C, which reached roughly the same percentage in 2000, scored almost 40% in 2000;
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,
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C climbed slightly to just over 45% in 2005. Later its percentage stabilized until 2010.
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,
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B reduced and touched the lowest mark at just under 40% in 2005 after that, it jumped to the same fraction in 2000. The Graph demonstrates that
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A, the
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one in 2000, recorded approximately 35% in 2000;
then
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it leapt significantly to roughly 55% in 2010.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words country with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • notable
  • significant
  • comparison
  • higher education
  • young people
  • year-on-year
  • socio-economic factors
  • government policy
  • economic conditions
  • cultural attitudes
  • globalization
  • educational reforms
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